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Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Teaser Tuesday #44

Finally! I am able to get a Teaser Tuesday post up. As you might have already noticed, this week's post will be a little different. I recently restarted writing my book, and I figured it was high time to share part of it with my fabulous followers!

I'd really appreciate comments, suggestions, etc., good or bad. Thanks so much; enjoy!

I stared at his pale, bony hand on my shoulder. He removed it when he acknowledged my scowl.

“I never gave you one,” I stated, replying to his question. “What do you want?”

“I only wish to ask of your plans for tomorrow afternoon.”

“And why would I tell you that?” I inquired cautiously.

“You would tell me,” he started slowly, “because you can see me.”

So what do you think? Of course, some of this might end up being taken out, or rewritten, but so far, personally, I'm loving it! Over the next few months, I'll try to post up some teasers to see what you think along the way, but don't count on anything!

Happy Reading!


Sana said...

OMG, I am in love with the teaser! What is your book all about? I would love to read it =D

A new follower of your blog!

Sana @ artsy musings of a bibliophile

M L Sawyer said...

Interesting read though for real feedback I would need to see more as from the little snipit I can't tell if you have previoulsy described Mr. Boney-hand enough for me to know him as a character.

Keep writing though and good luck.

Anonymous said...

This book your writing, is it a love story? :) <3

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