I'd really appreciate comments, suggestions, etc., good or bad. Thanks so much; enjoy!
I stared at his pale, bony hand on my shoulder. He removed it when he acknowledged my scowl.
“I never gave you one,” I stated, replying to his question. “What do you want?”
“I only wish to ask of your plans for tomorrow afternoon.”
“And why would I tell you that?” I inquired cautiously.
“You would tell me,” he started slowly, “because you can see me.”
So what do you think? Of course, some of this might end up being taken out, or rewritten, but so far, personally, I'm loving it! Over the next few months, I'll try to post up some teasers to see what you think along the way, but don't count on anything!